I want to
live a day of dominated silence
A day of overcastting
quietness.
Escape the
world noise.
Avoid
painful criticizing swords.
A world
where all I can hear is the sound of my steps.
Where I can
shout out my thoughts without any regrets.
Rip all the maps people had drawn for my future.
To stop
feeling like I am a controlled creature.
To see the
world from my view not through people's eyes.
To make my
own decisions and learn how to take a decisive stands.
Because I
want to color my life with my own crayons.
And to have
faith in myself which will help me carry on.
-Masa-
i wish that could happened !
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem! I know now you don't think you have any say in the decisions of your life, but you will have lots of time being in charge of you life later. Enjoy your time now. I know it's easy for me to say that, I make my own decisions. :-) I love the imagery you have created in this poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Delete-massa- I really enjoyed when i read it. that amazing to think like this and i hope for you to achieve every thing you want. keep going. you can do it. :):)
ReplyDeletenice poem masa ! i liked the last 2 lines :)
ReplyDeleteThat is so touching I like quitness
ReplyDeleteThe best thing in the world is to stay alone and calm ..
really great writinh
Thank you for sharing Masa
"Escape the world noise" is my favorite line! There are times in each of our lives when we want to escape the world; maybe ponder life and what it holds for us. I hope that your quiet times allow you to move forward in "coloring your own life."
ReplyDeleteI really like it its a intersting story
ReplyDeleteThis is very powerful writing. You have communicated so much about yourself in so few words. Thank you for sharing. May you find your quiet space always.
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