The deadly sorrow in her glory eyes
Dew drops were all over her rosy cheeks
Her glossy black hair shelters her neck scars.
Wearing that majestic dress as the Greeks
Her lament dragged me into world of grief
If only I could know what's her secret
A story of what she's been through in brief
Would get my eyes off her tight jail bracelet
Abusing husband, was not expected
What an awful crime against humanity
A fair judgment is to get asserted
Respecting people is morality
Don't slave people, They were born to be free
That's what all humans need to clearly see
-Masa-
Masa, I so admire you for trying to write a sonnet! Keep on trying new formats; we love to read them.
ReplyDeleteWow Masa, is this about someone you knew? It's very powerful. It's fun to try to stretch your writing muscles with a new format, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteMy students are writing too, at http://kidblog.org/WritingOurOwnWords/
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DeleteMassa you should be like Shakespeare great sonnet!
ReplyDeleteSalah..Thank you classmate.
DeleteThis sonnet is beautiful and sad and poignant. I have been seeing briefly on TV a girl who killed her boyfriend and is claiming he abused her. I wish we didn't have to know these things. I wish she could live her life unharmed. You are right. We should all be free.
ReplyDeleteGreat words. You created such a mood with your sonnet. I read it three times just to give it the attention it deserved.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I really appreciate it . :)
DeleteWe all need to be free
ReplyDeletesuch a great sonnet Massa !!
Thank you :)
DeleteMassa! that's a great sonnet and I wish that you can write more and more. I really enjoyed reading it
ReplyDeleteThank you MBA. And I will keep writing :)
Deletemassa that's really great .... :) :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Areej.:)
Deleteyour welcome -massa- .... :):)
ReplyDeletewow its really great
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