Sunday, March 10, 2013

Masa's Sonnet #1




The deadly sorrow in her glory eyes
Dew drops were all over her rosy cheeks
Her glossy black hair shelters her neck scars.
Wearing that majestic dress as the Greeks
Her lament dragged me  into world of grief 
If only I could know what's her secret 
A story of what she's been through in brief
Would get my eyes off her tight jail bracelet 
Abusing husband, was not expected
What an awful crime against humanity 
A fair judgment is to get asserted 
Respecting people is morality 
Don't slave people, They were born to be free
That's what all humans need to clearly see

-Masa-

17 comments:

  1. Masa, I so admire you for trying to write a sonnet! Keep on trying new formats; we love to read them.

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  2. Wow Masa, is this about someone you knew? It's very powerful. It's fun to try to stretch your writing muscles with a new format, isn't it?

    My students are writing too, at http://kidblog.org/WritingOurOwnWords/

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  3. Massa you should be like Shakespeare great sonnet!

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  4. This sonnet is beautiful and sad and poignant. I have been seeing briefly on TV a girl who killed her boyfriend and is claiming he abused her. I wish we didn't have to know these things. I wish she could live her life unharmed. You are right. We should all be free.

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    1. Thank you , and I wish we don't have to know these tragedies, but we can't pretend none of this happened , we have to fight it!

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  5. Great words. You created such a mood with your sonnet. I read it three times just to give it the attention it deserved.

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    1. Thank you. I really appreciate it . :)

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  6. We all need to be free
    such a great sonnet Massa !!

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  7. Massa! that's a great sonnet and I wish that you can write more and more. I really enjoyed reading it

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    1. Thank you MBA. And I will keep writing :)

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  8. massa that's really great .... :) :)

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