Let’s forget about the world and think about today
let’s be the one who doesn’t care what people say
let’s be close and take our love to a hideaway
don’t be afraid I’ll be there when ever you want me to stay
let’s cooperate together and break the fear away
I promised you that I will never walk away
you will be in my heart forever no matter when people cast you away
let’s make everything soft like a waterway
I want you to be happy everyday
so we can celebrate today like it’s your birthday
hold me tight so I will be stuck on your way
do you know what will happen if you leave me and go away?
I will lay in my tomb wasting away
I really love you in a crazy way
-Yara-
Yara, I appreciate your willingness to try new forms in your writing. I think my favorite phrase is: "I promised you that I will never walk away
ReplyDeleteyou will be in my heart forever no matter when people cast you away." Keep writing!
Wow. That's a lot of lines in a row that rhyme! That's a real challenge. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteActually I tried my best
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nice poem i agree with you!
ReplyDeleteSalah .. Thank you
Delete"so we can celebrate today like it’s your birthday" I loved that sentence because it really reflects your will to be happy for ever after.That was a great poem. Thanks for sharing it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Massa
Delete-yara- that's amazing poem. it made me really happy. i will try do that to make my life better. thanks yara keep going please... :) :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Areej
Deleteand keep trying
Wow! nice poem, i like the way your rhymed it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you very much
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