Monday, March 18, 2013

Love




Let’s forget about the world and think about today
let’s be the one who doesn’t care what people say
let’s be close and take our love to a hideaway
don’t be afraid I’ll be there when ever you want me to stay
let’s cooperate together and break the fear away
I promised you that I will never walk away
you will be in my heart forever no matter when people cast you away
let’s make everything soft  like a waterway
I want you to be happy everyday
so we can celebrate today like it’s your birthday
hold me tight so I will be stuck on your way
do you know what will happen if you leave me and go away?
I will lay in my tomb wasting away
I really love you in a crazy way 


-Yara-

11 comments:

  1. Yara, I appreciate your willingness to try new forms in your writing. I think my favorite phrase is: "I promised you that I will never walk away
    you will be in my heart forever no matter when people cast you away." Keep writing!

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  2. Wow. That's a lot of lines in a row that rhyme! That's a real challenge. Nice job.

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    1. Actually I tried my best
      thank you

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  3. "so we can celebrate today like it’s your birthday" I loved that sentence because it really reflects your will to be happy for ever after.That was a great poem. Thanks for sharing it.

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  4. -yara- that's amazing poem. it made me really happy. i will try do that to make my life better. thanks yara keep going please... :) :)

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  5. Wow! nice poem, i like the way your rhymed it :)

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