Thursday, March 21, 2013

I wish, I want, I need

I need to be organized

I need to focus on school 

I need good job to feed my family

I need good college degree

I need to live my life


I wish was not ESL student

I wish I go to good college

I wish I get married

I wish to become more religious

I wish my wife lovely 


I want to be one of the richest guys on the world

I want to get money for college

I want to get kids

I want to become a PA

I want smart kid that doesn’t give me hard time on school


  1. I wish you will get married salah

  2. I love the format for this poem. I may have my students try it.

  3. I really like this format too. You did a nice job, Salah

  4. I think that your last line is my favorite! I wish that all your wishes will come true!

  5. Nice collection of wishes and wants. I think my students would like writing these too.

  6. Simple wishes for a perfect life.I hope all of your dreams come true.

  7. Great wishes Salah
    I wish you become a PA

  8. I wish you could feel proud of being an ESL student. You have something very special that many people would love to have -- you speak more than one language, and you are a part of more than one culture. I know it's hard to go to school in another language, but ESL students are the most special students in the school. You have unique insights and talents that regular American kids dream of. I enjoyed your list of wishes -- you have some very special dreams!

    -- Mrs. M (an ESL teacher)

  9. that really interesting -Salah-. I wish you get all... lolll :) :)


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